The idea had potential, but the execution had numerous problems. I don't even know where to begin, so I'm not sure I will.The dialogue moved fast, which was nice, but at times read very jittled. The female characters were deplorable. The actions of the MCs were just slightly better than the females so as to seem acceptable, but really, they weren't.It was insta-attraction, which I believe. However, the insta-attraction very quickly moved to love, which I didn't believe. This is enjoyable if you can get past, once again, shitty females and displace all credibility in your romance.