Cute story but I would say the first half had quite a few glaring editing mistakes. Numerous sentences had missing words or "to" instead of "too." Also, several awkwardly worded sentences that took me out of the story because I was noticing the syntax and not the story arc.I haven't started reading the second one in series yet, but I did glance through it quickly. I'm wondering if they would have flowed better with them combined? Either way I'm looking forward to the next two.